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by mark
Description
Lazy class made the teacher angry, then smashed.
Comments
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Jordan Lewers
Funny, but the actions of the characters kind of betray the dialogue a bit
Tim
The animation looks fairly decent on this. It could use some follow through on some quicker actions. I just am not sure that the actions make sense with dialogue though, especially the book throw and the teacher slamming the laptop. And the camera pan just kinda takes my eye off the character. If the camera was still the eye would be drawn to the character which is the important part.