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Rookie Error
by James H
Superheroes don't start their career being amazing and superb, everyone has to start at the bottom, some just aren't as good as others though...
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Tari Mack
The story is good and clear, but the character animation is mostly stiff. The lip synch in the first shot is off. Frames 197 - 234 are the nicest moment of character animation.
Clara Myers
I loved that you acknowledged the music with the little floating character! That's the first time I've seen an entry play around with that aspect
Jasmine Keith
Clear style and clean lines but overly simple animation/movement.
Tari Mack
The story and character design is nice and clear. The character animation though is really limited and stiff though. The lip synch is off in the first shot. Frames 201-236 have a strong facial expression.