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Practice Makes Perfect
by Ben Davis
A young man learns one last secret.
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syrus johnson
good ending
Jean Lamy
I like it :)
Karl Pontau
Characters seem very springy, movements don't fit with the tone of the audio. Love the ending.
Khalifa Abdullah Al-mana
Good job! ... I liked the anticipation in the very first second before the start of the conversation.. small but made the scene looks like real acting
Tari Mack
The facial expressions are really strong, but the t-shirt character's sitting back on frames 160-183 is too fast, and so is the leotard character getting up at 284-291. Frames 0-152 are the best, really smooth and natural.
Tim
The character interaction feels very natural. The attention to the small movements while listening and such really make these characters come alive.





