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Practice Makes Perfect

by Ben Davis

Final Rating: 6.32. Finished #15 out of 118 entries.

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Animator

Ben Davis

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

A young man learns one last secret.

Comments

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syrus johnson

good ending

Jean Lamy

I like it :)

Karl Pontau

Characters seem very springy, movements don't fit with the tone of the audio. Love the ending.

Khalifa Abdullah Al-mana

Good job! ... I liked the anticipation in the very first second before the start of the conversation.. small but made the scene looks like real acting

Tari Mack

The facial expressions are really strong, but the t-shirt character's sitting back on frames 160-183 is too fast, and so is the leotard character getting up at 284-291. Frames 0-152 are the best, really smooth and natural.

Tim

The character interaction feels very natural. The attention to the small movements while listening and such really make these characters come alive.