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Taking a friend for granted
by Kerem
but he wants some alone time
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Alberto Fernandez
Would have liked to see this worked further. The lipsynch seems a bit off, but I guess it's the sound channel badly placed on the video. I like the "why not" poses, as if brown guy is under the blue one, but then the blue guy points his finger at 163 and that pose lacks force, apart from the silhouette being confuse. The antics are there recognizable, and it looks you need more work on this.
Also, from 49 to 64, brown character loses a bit of equilibrium, it looks like he's going to fall. Seems a nice start imo, keep up.
Satish Kumar
Finish and upload anyway, going good.
digitalcoffee
Nice, but animation should be less choppy.





