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Taking a friend for granted

by Kerem

Final Rating: 3.98. Finished #57 out of 93 entries.

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Animator

Kerem

Experience

3rd year student

Time Taken

about 45 hours

Description

but he wants some alone time

Comments

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Alberto Fernandez

Would have liked to see this worked further. The lipsynch seems a bit off, but I guess it's the sound channel badly placed on the video. I like the "why not" poses, as if brown guy is under the blue one, but then the blue guy points his finger at 163 and that pose lacks force, apart from the silhouette being confuse. The antics are there recognizable, and it looks you need more work on this.
Also, from 49 to 64, brown character loses a bit of equilibrium, it looks like he's going to fall. Seems a nice start imo, keep up.

Satish Kumar

Finish and upload anyway, going good.

digitalcoffee

Nice, but animation should be less choppy.