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The Nutcracker And Fairy
by Murat Sari
A Nut Cracker is having an argument with his friend the sugar plum Fairy
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Shreyas Dutta
there is a problem of audio synch , and at the person speaking dialogue is not clear at all, Man 1 is done by nutcraker at first and by the fairy at last , how could you miss that detail? moreover a ton of improvment is needed + i believe this snt animated by you , its just some software generated , i dunno , it doesnt look that well done
Marshall Hallam
I think this'd do a lot better if you decided to keep the dialogue consistent.
Haritz TZ
"Why not" was supposed to be the first guy saying tho.
digitalcoffee
Maybe give the characters a bit more weight to their movement instead of just going in a straight line.