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A coach and a player....

by Amrithraj

Final Rating: 4.59. Finished #37 out of 93 entries.

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Animator

Amrithraj

Experience

Not much

Time Taken

One week

Description

A player is disappointed about his coach..

Comments

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GLTC

could use my variety in expressions

Boba3d

Animation and acting are not bad but situation and environment don't fit with the sound

John Tyson

Their faces don't feel like they match the dialogue and there's nothing to account for the slamming sound. I like the set up though.

digitalcoffee

Why is a basketball game outside on grass when it should be inside?

Alberto Fernandez

Got the feel that with the Malcolm rig the animators tend to overbend the upper part of the spine in relation with the rest of it. To me it's noticeable at the last frame for instance. I like how through the lenses you can actually see the background unblurred :D