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Thanks Phil

by Tom Weatherill

Final Rating: 2.26. Finished #90 out of 93 entries.

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Animator

Tom Weatherill

Experience

5

Time Taken

1 week

Description

Two guys squabbling

Comments

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Alberto Fernandez

I see some stiffness in general, and unnatural poses:
left guy's torso and left shoulder should be aiming upwards a little bit as he's got his left hand on the fridge; right guy from 186 on.
I see you risked at the camera set, but it's a bit umcomfortable specially at the beginning; should you remove the first camera travel it would feel more natural.