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Crime Lab
by Joel
A superhero examines his partners crime lab
Comments
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Vedanth Panchoo
Characters are a bit too far away from the camera. I like designs however.
Gull
Good effort... lacks energy however...not a lot going on for such a dynamic soundtrack.
James Harkonnen
yea that superhero character has a problem in his ik legs and it was never fixed. I don't blame you for that but still it gets in the way a lot. Posing isn't ideal and acting isn't quite on point. Splinings are fine.
Prashant Makwana
So-so
Brian Rusnak
Nice work! I like both characters' interaction with the set, adds to the "life" of the shot.
One thing that might help would be to push the camera in closer. Right now, it is very far away from the characters and it is difficult to see exactly how their faces are animated. Pushing the camera closer would better frame the animation.
Nice job!
Jake Lee
Nice animation! Would be great to see more exaggerated movement.
Elisabeth Janerka
The staging makes it hard to read their facial expressions
King Thabo Masigo Mahlagare
Needs a lot of work on weight. A lot of the motion feels floaty.
Florian Linet
we're too far from the action !