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I Like "That" In a Sidekick
I look forward to critique! This was a great experience and hopefully, after review, I'll be able to incorporate this into my updated demo reel.
Comments
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Brian Rusnak
Nice work, I like the acting choices of the characters.
I think the camera is pulled back too far, and its difficult to see the facial animation well. I would push the camera in closer, while still keeping the set props in frame.
Fred
Love the extra side action from the 'sidekick' worrying about the tube. Nicely done. Very entertaining :)
Gull
Good effort...elements of the animation very distracting however...difficult to know where to look.
James Harkonnen
Try to pay more attention on weight distribution, you have a heavy character and he needs to look heavy.
Prashant Makwana
Respectable
Andrei Llacuna
- try to exaggerate the mouth just a bit more.
- The staging and composition is a bit off, there's a lot of space around the characters. Try to play with the composition, shapes and the poses and placement of the characters.
- the pantomime is fine, line of action needs more exaggeration.
overall, cool acting choice for the characters but need to emphasize the poses and composition.
Elisabeth Janerka
Staging could be more interesting, and closer as it is hard to see their facial expressions properly