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Final Rating: 5.86. Finished #15 out of 70 entries.

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Experience

one and half year at animation school

Time Taken

26 hour

Description

Science lab in the box

Comments

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James Harkonnen

this is full of tiny details I can tell. This can potentially be top notched if acted out right. Right now the only thing that's holding it back is the set, and the fact that you cover the dude's face with a box. I view that is semi cheating.

Gull

Thinking outside the box...or is that inside.
Nice animation...needs a little cleaning up.

Prashant Makwana

great thought! the box on the head covers hall sound of "who's saying anything about..."

Jake Lee

Nice acting choices!!

Brian Rusnak

Funny idea, the box being animated in place of the 2nd character is a nice touch.

I feel like the timing could we worked on slightly. The superhero character leaves the frame rather quickly, compared to the rest of his animation.

Nice job!

Emma

Great!

Andrw Yair Guio

I like it

Elisabeth Janerka

Fun set up, but the timing should be tweaked. The characters are constantly moving and their movement feels a bit floaty. The staging could be more interesting too

Pushpendra Sharma

nice use of prop :)

King Thabo Masigo Mahlagare

Nice One! playblast in viewport 2.0 with anti-aliasing and ambient occlusion on if you can next time, particularly if you don't have time to light and render, just for a cleaner playblast