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Costume Party

by Juliette

Final Rating: 5.61. Finished #22 out of 59 entries.

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Animator

Juliette

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

nearly 40 hours

Description

First time trying a very cartoon and "noodle" animation style. It was a great exercise, I learned a lot !
All the feedbacks are good to take to improve and progress.

Mailo and Megoo Rig by "Alorema Rigs"

Comments

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Don

I like the style. :)

Romantra

The reactions of the kid feel a bit too much.

Alice

Good animation but the acting is way too dramatic and not coherent with the tone of the dialogue.

Elisabeth Janerka

Nice setup, but you should try to dampen the movement on the character that's not speaking as it draws quite a bit of attention and makes it hard to focus on the character doing the talking.

Katie Steuernagel

The movements in this are really fun, but sometimes there is too much movement to focus on. Still, very cute!

Juan

Add more In-Betweens and Slow in and outs. More Animation fundamentals needed
cool characters

Animatical

Because of how much the characters move I don't know where to put my eyes. Try to work on that.