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Interesting meeting

by Hong Anh

Final Rating: 5.04. Finished #27 out of 59 entries.

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Animator

Hong Anh

Experience

one year and a half

Time Taken

about 10 days

Description

A little girl went shopping with her parents when she saw a goblin

Comments

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Kyra Simone

Great start with these poses. They are exaggerated in a lovely way. What needs work is what goes in-between. At 142, or 'well-', our lipsync gets lost because the arms are out of sync with the dialogue. Often in this anim, the poses are not given enough time to settle and end up feeling jarring. These poses are energetic, so this is the right direction, but in order for a movement to feel natural, you need more settle than you've got.

Katie Steuernagel

There’s a lot of improvement to be made, but the ending is funny!!

Juan

large task, 4 characters.
add more Inbetweens, slow in and outs. Work on the Animation fundamentals.