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Burnt Cookies

by Jiaxin Kan

Final Rating: 5.82. Finished #21 out of 52 entries.

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Animator

Jiaxin Kan

Experience

Student

Time Taken

1 month

Description

This is my first submission for 11-second club :D

Comments

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Ben Zingo

The lipsync/mouth shapes are much more expressive in the first half.
Also around frame 42, make sure when the body is curving, you also lean back a bit, it feels like he's leaning too far forward and his center of gravity is off? It'll also help with the emphasis when he leans forward