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Holiday Rush
A panicked father freaking out over not being able to get gifts for his children.
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kevin scott
Good job! I don’t think you need to hit every accent. When that happens it takes away from all the accents on a whole.
Joshua Morley
Good execution! Only thought; we're not landing poses as much as I would personally like to see. Flows through things too much, making it feel floaty.
Ben Zingo
the high frame rate feels buttery smooth, but you have too many poses/acting decisions in here. It feels like the character is constantly in motion. Try focusing on hitting a few key poses/key actions, with maybe a couple smaller movements woven in for style/realism. You have lots of nice details with the eyes, fingers, etc. so, good work! Just remember that sometimes less is more!