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Graduation flash!
by Andy
Description
Olive gets scared by the flash in the middle of the moment of her photo graduation session.
Comments
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Ben Zingo
make sure you add some anticipation, overshoot, etc.
A lot of the head movements feel stiff and jerky
Leonardo Rivera
Story didn’t make sense cause there was no picture of the photographer. Felt like a lot of unnecessary twinning with the arms throughout as well which took me out of it. I like your idea though, and the boy is well done