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mysterious photo-3D
it is very pleasure for me and i was enjoying each portions while dubbing
2 and half weeks
the character ray visualizing the "mysterious photo" with the person who has taken it.
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Lucia Caccavale
Really nice body movements, just need's more time spent on the lipsyncing.
Ben Zingo
movements feel a bit fast/sudden, make sure you add a little anticipation, overshoot/settle, etc.
and seems like your lipsync/mouth shapes could use some work. In particular, the horitontal movement of the corners of the mouth
Leonardo Rivera
I think the timing on some things could’ve been improved. His body starts moving before the first line of dialogue, I might’ve tightened it up so he moves quicker into the top pose, hold, then come down on her first line. Your story beats were clear and I like your staging of the shot