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The last decent photo
by Redford Wong
Ray is comforting Dana but not paying attention on driving. It made the photo become his last decent photo
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Ben Zingo
Don't forget to add blinks!
the camera focal length is also really close, you could get a more natural feel by increasing it (maybe you ran into trouble with the camera clipping into the vehicle, or vehicle frame blocking the camera? If you're not using multiple camera angles, you could just chop that part of the car off)
Mahesh Waran
Her eye dart floats at places , the last action is very pose to pose
Thomas Darmon-Sanger
Good animation, good story, good job.
Alex
Great character reaction at the end
Brian
Creative ending! Don't drive distracted, folks.