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Boa
by Bongkochrat
A short animation movie clip for 11Seconds'
December competition.
Comments
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Ben Zingo
the characters seem a bit small compared to the proportions of the car (in particular, that steering wheel looks huge).
Also a bit odd that they're just talking back and forth in the car, and there is no photo for context.
some of the actions also feel fast/kinda jerky. Make sure you add a little anticipation, overshoot, etc!
Leonardo Rivera
Story doesn't make sense. Where's the photo? It should be clear from the staging and the characters actions what's going on in the scene even without the audio and I think that's what's lacking in this shot.