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Watching speechlessly

by JUSTIN TAN SHI JIE

Final Rating: 4.51. Finished #72 out of 96 entries.

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Experience

Student

Time Taken

31 day x 24 hours

Description

Two people questioned looking at the photo

Comments

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Ben Zingo

Make sure you add blinks, anticipation, overshoot, etc

the shot at frame 180 when he sighs also needs to last longer, otherwise the cut feels too quick

Leonardo Rivera

Movements felt mechanical and story didnt make sense.