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Only one
by BigZ
Description
A conversation between lovers
Comments
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Mahesh Waran
Everything for me works except for the laugh at the beginning
Leonardo Rivera
The audience should be able to tell whats happening in the scene even without the audio and I think thats the main issue with this shot. Theres no staging, no second character not even a photo.
Bee Kai En
I think the rhythm and pose can be more better
Alex
Great work on the movement, but I would have liked to see the other character in it as well