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Girl Problems
Description
A boy was annoyed by his bestie after she complains about their group photo.
Comments
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Ben Zingo
the body movement/acting looks pretty good, but your shots/framing is jarring. Make sure you read up on the 180 rule, and maybe do some research into camera angles, storyboarding, etc so that your shot reads clearly!
Leonardo Rivera
Great shot! I feel like fewer poses would’ve help portray her emotion better. If you would’ve kept her in the pose around frame 73, and then from there moved into her next I think it would’ve read better timing wise. Same with the guy I feel like he’s always moving after the laugh and never settles. Overall good job