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Couple comedy

by Gabriel

Final Rating: 6.04. Finished #17 out of 96 entries.

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Animator

Gabriel

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

20 days

Description

A couple arguing but actually not.

Comments

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Ben Zingo

I like how expressive the characters are, though at 167, the guy's movement backward feels choppy, and sometimes it seems like there's so much going on with both characters, that it's a little hard to follow. Maybe it's too much of a good thing?
There's some really nice polish, but some actions feel abrupt

Leonardo Rivera

I think you should choose only the most important poses that get the story across and act within those poses. Just too many unnecessary movements going on

Sam Kim

Very good, fluid animation.