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Accident
by Sirisha
Description
Dana reads the paper in hospital after an accident.
Comments
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Thomas Darmon-Sanger
Grat visual storytelling! This is truly what animation is for!
Ben Zingo
better lighting & less glossy skin textures would help us see the characters acting better
actions feel jerky, make sure you're using easing/splines, and adding anticipation, overshoot, etc. when going from one pose to another.
I think your lipsync could also use some work, but it's honestly hard to see