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Routine rounds
by Luis Antonio Meco December Competition Winner
Agent Ellie Banks, from the Magic Sprite Activity Control Agency, is making her routine rounds of the Magic Forest. Will she find anything out of the ordinary?
Comments
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Davit Martirosyan
Good animation, the idea too. I think the pencil hand from 290 to 315 is not finalized and looks a little wooden. but for me, this is the FIRST PLACE! Congratulations
Jay G.
I love the idea of a detective interrogation of Sprite Fright!!!!! And you executed it so well!!!!
Shadavion
this animation was really good. i felt like I was actually watching a Pixar film.
Jorge Zagatto Neto
hahaha I loved the storytelling and all the emotions going around the mushroom. The background is very well executed as well.
The only two things I would say are:
1. the hopping of the guy seems a bit floaty.
2. the acting of the girl seems the least interesting part. I think you could work more on her eyes and lipsync. Make the facial muscles more connected between eyes and mouth. And for the "your magic" movement, I feel like her eyes could anticipate the movement. And maybe we don't need such a strong cushion as we have now.
Katie Steuernagel
This animation made me gasp!! So beautifully done. The staging, the acting, the lighting, the shift in focus especially. This looks so professional, like it's straight from a movie. Very impressive!!!