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Lolabeth and the fox
4 years
It took me about less than a month to animate this
This is my first fully rendered animation on Toon-Boom harmony about an android named Lolabeth and her ongoing rivalry with an anthropomorphic fox named Finnegan. I hope you enjoy it.
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Richard Clark
Wow, you choose a touchy and controversial approach here. Are you trying to convey that men are "animals?" Aside from that, the camera cuts are good. I don't think you need a pan on the wide shot but that's my own preference. I would like to see more movement in the characters bodies instead of one pose then dialogue, then pose again, and then repeat. Lip sync is not bad...just some parts that need fixed or just a tad off.