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Dumb am I?
by Joshua
A Married couple attempting to find the best way to solve a crisis, but one insults the other, thankfully the insulted party is more playful than offended.
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Richard Clark
Good effort! Love the characters!
You should try and shoot reference so that you can get a better idea on how you want to animate your characters. If you did, then I would follow that a bit better. I think you might have pushed the performance at the end too far and your characters lack weight to them and are floaty throughout.
Lip sync is ok. Composition is ok
James Delaney
Your poses need to more holds. It helps massively with readability. Everything is swimming from one pose to another.