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December Comp 2024
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He will not stop until he gets what he wants.
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Joshua
Good command of lines and movement, but there's a little too much movement going on here for the tempo of the audio.
Richard Clark
I feel like the hair and clothes are moving too much where it looks jarring. Good example of this is in the first shot with the male character's jacket. It's going crazy back and forth.
Plus, I'd say work on trying to keep the characters consistent throughout. One example is at around frame 97, the male's head enlarges.