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Big Red Button
by Kel Sneddon
The fate of the world hangs in one man's decision
Comments
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Richard Clark
Not bad!! Cool setup! Cool characters!
The male walking up has no weight to it.
The lip sync could improve in parts.
From frame 180-195, I don't see much of a change in the female's left-hand pose. Would love to see it relax more before it goes into a flat open hand on the chest of the male. Maybe don't hold the fingers in that position after she lets go of the arm as long and rather have it settle in a relaxed pose before the hand goes to the chest.
Before the male comes to the red button, the female's motion looks robotic.
James Delaney
Niiiiiiice.
Paul Lange
The staging of the shot sets the scene up nicely! Well done on the facial expressions, too.
BIBOUGA JERRY
Super,
juste la main posée sur la poitrine, qui ne suit pas le mouvement