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Not Adaquately

by DemonEye Elf

Final Rating: 4.84. Finished #76 out of 200 entries.

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Animator

DemonEye Elf

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

2 weeks on and off

Description

cuteness overload~

Comments

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Sarah Dunn

In the future turn your HUD display off.

kishan Rathod

Needs a lot of improvement

April Slocombe

Good body language and facial expressions in this context. I like the man in the red top looking angry and the redness on top of his head.

Tadeusz Ciborowski

I wasnt sure if the purple tshit dude was trying to grab the other dudes box? If he was just being clumsy then I think it would maybe help if he did not such a big motion. I would not use color to make the other dude look angry. You should be able to do that using just the face and body. In fact I think he was angry already. Think the bursting part is too big too.. less is more.