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adaquatulance
by david
man is doing adequately with his writing.
Comments
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Kristin Turnipseed
Looks like this may still be in the blocking phase
Sara
The camera angle was not very good in order to show some reaction from the characters. It was difficult to see the animation.
Steve Legate
I think a different camera angle would have made it more pleasing to the eye. The main char Bill is turned away from the audience the whole time. Maybe over the shoulder of second char or moving the camera to the left to see the face of Bill.
kishan Rathod
need more !!Needs a lot of improvement
Callie Smith
Placing the man hat on the rack was pretty neat but lacks a final finesse and resulting in him feeling unfinished. Bill also feels very linear and stiff, especially with his arm movement when he's trying to express himself.
April Slocombe
The mouth of the left-hand man doesn't seem to move when he says Bill's name and he remains static for the latter half and the staging is a bit poor what with Bill's face barely being shown but his movements are suitably subtle.
Vijith
it looks like its incomplete.Maybe you are still blocking it.