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real friends.....
by prasanth
real friends they are dedicated to each other....
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Valentious Williams
i loved this one ,but man i hate to see when some has some thing good and it suffers from bad Staging.The acting was on the money but staging killed it brutally.Id have love this one to make it to the top.
Lee
Good job!
kishan Rathod
Needs a lot of improvement
Brajagopal Arubam
ha! i luv the story, its entertaining.Proper framing of camera and a little bit of detail in ur layout could've earn more stars buddy.
amitmenon
HAHAHA:D
Satya
Nice... The second character whose lighting the canon and the canon itself could have more reaction after the firing ... but nice :)
Shelby Christie
Nice gag! But I'm wondering why the dude was in the cannon in the first place! Haha. This is going to be nice if you decide to finish it up :D
April Slocombe
Despite the initial confusion of thinking Bill is the man inside the cannon, the movements and lip sync are consistent and Bill's face before he is shot out is great anticipation. Bill being shot out actually made me laugh.
Christof
For every action....
It would be nice to see the cannon pushed back a little by the force of the explosion, and the guy with the hat dodging it a little.