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Grouch

by Peyman Bodaghi

Final Rating: 6.45. Finished #13 out of 200 entries.

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Animator

Peyman Bodaghi

Experience

4 years

Time Taken

3 week... part Time...

Description

peyman Bodaghi

Comments

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Jay Smith

Awesome fluid motion and great timing and spacing!!!

Borislav Dimitrov

the shot looks great. the only think that distracts me the entire shot the hands are twined.

Joel Murphy

could benefit from stronger lighting. Nice framing of the action though!

kishan Rathod

Good !! animation i like the walking style its funny !! good played with facial to !! good job !!

Satya

Nice work :)

Kristin Turnipseed

I really like the walk forward on this character, it really fits his personality! Nice job!

philipp seis

why not burst big ? But it's a good one !

Rajesh Rs

:) superbb :)

April Slocombe

Bill stretching out his arms is choppy and he walks a bit too fast for my liking but his lip sync and facial expressions are good.

Stéphane Sartori

Very nice smears and Nice work on the use of space in this shot. It's reaaly cool to see the character coming from far to very close. I just think it doesn't match with the sound. But well, that's my own opinion. Technically, everything is very good, though!

[user]

Great job

Mohamed Javith

nice.. the only part that bothers is the last squishyness you gave for the character to make it alive. too much settle in that part.. also, the antic he takes before saying " adequatulance" is over the top.. rest is nice..