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by carl cornish
My first submission. Started this very late in the month, because I just found out about the monthly competition. Please guys give as much feedback as possible, right now I'm all about getting better.
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Sarah Dunn
The animation is alright but could still use some more polishing. I like what you did with the sound symbols by the intercom. This would have been stronger if it told more of a story. For example, placing a sign or something to give a hint why is he in the basement with boxes
kishan Rathod
Needs a lot of improvement
April Slocombe
I like the idea of the other man's voice being broadcast via radio. Bill's movement is smooth while his poses are natural and his lip sync and facial expressions are very well done.