Bill

April Slocombe

While there is a lack of lip movement on the man on the right, the poses and lip sync are good while the animation is decent.

J.K. Riki

I had no idea what was going on the entire time. The characters' thoughts and feelings and the "why" of the scene totally escaped me. Be sure to focus as much attention as possible on this "why" instead of just moving them around, and it will show through the acting and connect with the audience. Good luck with future entries!