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Operation Adequatulance

by Dani Abram

Final Rating: 4.86. Finished #73 out of 200 entries.

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Animator

Dani Abram

Experience

Not as much as I'd like :D

Time Taken

A little over a weekend! I wish I'd decided to enter much sooner!

Description

A novice surgeon really should have more supervision...

Comments

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Jay Smith

I like the snapiness, but overall too much movement... IMHO.

Sarah Dunn

I really like this. I love how you gave a story of why the supervisor comes into the room (his reaction in the window). The only thing that could make it better is just a little more polishing.

Steve Legate

Funny! Nice concept.

April Slocombe

Movement is a little overdone, especially on the man in the white top but I like the poses the lip sync and the toon-shaded background.

Shelby Christie

The idea as a whole is pretty good, I just think it would have been funny to have a gag at the end, like if the patient's heart came flying back out with a little blood spurt or something.

And no, that's not morbid. Based on some of the entries I've seen before, that suggestion is pretty tame! Haha. Good job :D