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The traveler

by Jesiel Almeida

Final Rating: 5.56. Finished #26 out of 206 entries.

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Animator

Jesiel Almeida

Experience

Almost 4 years

Time Taken

3 wee

Description

A meddlesome dimension traveler is passing through our dimensions and stop to explain your destiny.

Comments

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Joel Murphy

Nice flow on the animation! I hope you do well!

Steve Kimbrey

Interesting! Really nice movement. It ends pretty abruptly and strange though,

David Krein

Beautiful job taking the potentially cliche approach and making it innovative.

Nishith

need work on lipsync...

Brent Forrest

whoooo. Reminds me of the Arilou! Love the looseness.

Michael O'Brien

This is a cool concept and really well done animation but what I see doesn't match everything I hear. Seems like the little sounds of the audio that are still crucial to the piece are overlooked for visual spectacle.

Amartya Mukherji

Nice animation, but the intensity and energy of the dialogue is not matching. You could have restricted the timing and spacing of your poses. Proper controlled, subtle and limited actions were needed.

Robert Huffmon

Body movement is great, very fluid and believable. Would have liked to have seen more facial and eye movement though.

James Trimm

some nice bounce in there

Ben Hopper

A lot of good stuff here, but the visuals don't mesh well with what's going on in the audio.

Jayvon Gomes

Great fluid motion!

ratna

very diff concept...starting was down.....bt it was nice to watch afterwards
best of luck

Sandra Tapia

Wow, love the concept!

Duy Nguyen

Nice motion, rendering and effects. The face needs to be as alive as the body performance though.