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The circular dimension.

by Esteban Mendez

Final Rating: 2.42. Finished #193 out of 206 entries.

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Animator

Esteban Mendez

Experience

Less than a year, but some exercisies some time ago.

Time Taken

My free time along the whole month

Description

My first entrie here. I'm not proud but I want you know about your opinions.

I have to improve the timming and lipsyinc, and a lot of more stuff.

Comments

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James Trimm

eyes are very staring

Justin Jones

Blink! Please blink! Why doesn't he blink? ;_;
He didn't appear to have any life in him. In terms of how it was blocked out at least, it's still very stiff. Loosen up a bit, and act out the scene to see how you would animate the character.

Brent Forrest

Keep at it.

ratna

his eyes are stuck :)

MartyB

moving too slow

Sandra Tapia

Nice job. I would probably work more on his eyes and lip sync animations. The eyes are always looking at the same place, not sure where and looks a little creepy.

Danielle Smith

Perhaps more interesting facial expressions and body language would help?