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The Universe!
by [deleted user]
[deleted user]
4 year college degree
12 days
As Orange alien looks at his hologram of the universe, he ponders about Earthlings, and attempts to teach Blue alien what he has learned.
-characters courtesy of boutique23.com
Comments
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Ben Hopper
I love the scene, but the animation needs a lot more love.
James Trimm
Really nice, esp body follow through. The only thing I want is perhaps more eye expressions/contrast (as he's got 3 of them!:) You could play around with this and have one eye doing soemthing different etc.?
Also they would be a bit cross-eyed when looking towards one thing (if you see what I mean?)
for example the end frame: the left eye should be looking more inwards and the top eye downwards, (if they are all meant to be looking at the dome thingy:)?
Eric Raffle
very nice just could have added some secondary animation to the helmet
Ben Wardle
Nice idea. I would work on the timing of the poses, the animation feels floaty.
Joyce Makker
I think this is pretty good, but the actions need to flow together more, especially those of the head. Sometimes the animation hits walls.
Sandra Tapia
Very nice job! I love this characters. I would probably put a little animation on the blue guy.
Steve Kimbrey
This is quite nice and I like the lip syncing. I think you could've made that big pose change on "now to US" instead of at the end of "eternity". The pose intensity would've fit the dialogue intensity better