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Eternity

by Michael A. Ryfinski

Final Rating: 2.95. Finished #166 out of 206 entries.

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Experience

5 years student animator

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

One man explaines a theory of the universe. Constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated.

Comments

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ben malberg

Very cool idea, original, and futuristic. I like the spin in the chair. Overall the piece feels way too mechanical. The joints need to be broken down more, and the arcs need to be created. Make sure to include more overshoot on your actions, so things don't look like they're hitting a wall. It's a good idea for a shot so I hope you work on it more.

Sandra Tapia

Nice concept.