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Circle and Sphere
by Rachel Ahern
2 years as a student
I'm not sure; a few days a week for a few weeks, perhaps.
A circus performer imparts a few words of metaphysical wisdom to his partner before taking a leap of faith.
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David Krein
Nice setup and pose ideas, just needs more polish in the arcs and pose to pose. The trampoline circle idea feels like an odd connection for the audio. But most of all the ending would do for a bit more attentiveness for the secondary character recognizing more over time that the other character's doing something... unsafe :) First couple watches it looked like he had just noticed he was missing, then I caught it was him noticing the rope being off him, so it didn't read like that because of how he looked at it.
Peter Meindertsma
nice job still quite a few things that are floating. just need to add some more deliberate actions
Sandra Tapia
I really like the concept. Very nice facial expressions and hand gestures.