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A Futile Attempt
by Joyce Makker
A hopeless attempt at explaining a theory... to a dog.
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Vin Liew
in my opinion, the overall animation is good.but the facial expression can be more exaggerate
Lilly Durrant
Try dropping the jaw down more with the dialogue 'us' as the lipsync doesn't quite fit with how the word is said - it maybe needs exaggerated a bit more.
Dylan MacBurnie
The movements are nice but your lip sync looks more like a mumble. The audio isn't exactly a grand speech, but it's got a little more shape to it than you gave it.
Jayvon Gomes
The movements are all similarly slow. I think if you added a few quicker motions, such as the motion to clicking the pen, it would have made it stronger
Oliver Pedersen
A bit lifeless in the face
Nathan
Great body animation, but the lip sync needs some work. Other than that great job!
Michael O'Brien
You payed attention to the background noises, I appreciate the very subtle detail of him clicking the pen.
Sandra Tapia
Very nice. I think that lip sync animation needs a little more work.