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Etetnity

by Bartek Jerczynski

Final Rating: 5.51. Finished #29 out of 206 entries.

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Experience

2,5

Time Taken

80h

Description

Magic...

Comments

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ben malberg

Nice staging and good expression of your character. The mouth animation I feel needs the most work. The card at the end looks cool, and a confident smile, which creates a change of emotion.

Amartya Mukherji

Very nicely animated. But the audio is coming before the lip animation. One more frame audio offset will give you a better result.

Yashesh Mistry

I loved the hold before "this is sphere". he is trying to search the word. Great.!
"But to them" - looked off the track to flow of your animation.

Paula Decanini

Watch the degree to which you open the jaw for the words. Some words, it only needs to open a little. Also there isn't a lot of hitting of the mouth shapes on the phonemes. Hand gestures are pretty good though!

Benjamin Osei Boateng

I like

MartyB

Great work :)

Sandra Tapia

Nice concept, facial expressions and lip sync animation. Not sure why is a "A" card a circle. Good job!

Joyce Makker

This was pretty good, aside from the lipsync. Maybe the lipsync isn't bad, but the audio is just offset? It looks off at least.

Ruth Agada

The lipsync needs more work but love the animation

Duy Nguyen

The mouth needs a lot of work as it doesn't feel like the character is saying the words