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My first performance animation.
Indifferent men talking...
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David Krein
The motion choices are a bit confusing because they don't hit very well to convey the idea, but the concepts work in general.
Jez
That his left hand at the beginning needs improvement, I think
James Trimm
i think the face needs some work, esp the eyes/ blinks are a bit distracting, the eyes seem to need more contrast
Lilly Durrant
Nice - Just mind out around frame 52, think the pupil in the eye on the right is moving while the one on the left isn't, which makes his eyes look unnatural there.
Yuri Marcel Vieira
careful with the eyes, around frame 55 they are looking on different directions and I dont think that was your intension
Brent Forrest
going wall eyed at the beginning is distracting, but this is alright
Ejen Shafiq Isa
his eyes were a bit floaty. thts the thing that distracted me first
Sandra Tapia
Nice job! When he says " as eternity" I would probably rise his right hand a little.