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No Meat
by mark davies
Short animation created in Adobe Flash
No time to neaten/ ink and colour before end of competition (curse you work commitments!!!)but hope you enjoy anyways :)
Comments
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Joe Jinks
Great character designs and I love the rabbit character. Nice acting as well with nice arcs and a really smooth animation.
James Hornby
looks good but i noticed on the bear you could do with easing into your poses a little more softly in some cases.
Adrian Winchell
Really shouldn't have such a big motion on the bear during the initial line - it pulls attention away from the rabbit and makes it harder to notice it's talking at first. props for 2D tho!
Suyog Patil
Nice .
Glenn Lazo
There's a lack of spacing in the bear, he always moves the same amount of frames in every movement. It lacks intention.