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Vegetarian Friend
by Ramsey Parks
After ordering burgers a man finds out his friend is a vegetarian.
Comments
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Adrian Winchell
I'd prefer to see this without the thought balloon, as it takes away from the animation. The motions are a little wooden, except for the weird squishy-head thing on the carnivore at the beginning. His point could use some body language to go with it as well.
Richard Adams
Aspects of this are really good, others not so much. The finger-pointing doesn't work for me. A "what?" gesture with both hands would've been much better.
S J Bennett
Love the move at the end. :)
Léo Miche
The characters should be the important thing in your scene.
Lucas Donaldson
nice squash and stretch
Kendra Kaye Coffey
Movements are over done in some places and under fine and stiff in others.