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Veggie
by Gary Seto
A waiters reaction to the boy being a vegetarian (Didn't have time to finish all the animation. But feedback is always welcome)
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Eric Raffle
given that we can see you didn't finish this one in time as there is no lip-sync, your motions are very choppy and you need to add more in-betweens and overlapping motions and slow in and out motions, needed way more work and I feel you could have given better character gestures as your character movements don't feel like a human would move they feel like a animator has animated them and I don't mean that as a compliment I mean it as you can see a animator has animated it, you need to study body motions more to get better realism.
Alice Reeve
Nice body language. The movements are looking a bit jerky though; try to aim for more fluidity.
Lucas Donaldson
Great sweeping motion of the adult. Though, could use some finishing up-ness. (lip sync, fine tuning of movements, etc.)
Richard Adams
Little boy character doesn't match the mature adult male voice coming out of him. Animation lacks polish overall. A little smoothing would help.
S J Bennett
Staging is not great - can't see grown-up's face clearly. Looks like you ran out of time for polish too.. ?
Adrian Winchell
Did you run out of time before you did the lipsync? D: