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by Mike Conway
An omnivore meets a vegetarian bear.
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Eric Raffle
not good when you only have the main key frames, you need to introduce more in-betweens ,follow-through , overlapping and all the rest of animation principles,
another thing to think of is if you have a bird character you must animate that character to its boundaries' and then push it a BIT MORE.
Alice Reeve
Good body language, especially the "what is wrong with you?!" at the end. But there could be way more movement!
Adrian Winchell
You've got a concept here, and done a ton of work on the lipsync, but there's really no animation - the characters pop from pose to pose, and those poses really are missing line of action and anything else to really sell the shot. You've got a good start on designing your cartoon, and while this would take a lot of work to have decent animation, you're on your way!
Kendra Kaye Coffey
There's some great rough beginnings here. I think around frame 92ish the character on the left should have those mitten motions just a hair before he is doing those motions. Seems laggy.