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What is wrong with you?

by Lauren Elizabeth MacColl

Final Rating: 5.60. Finished #38 out of 231 entries.

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Experience

5 years, BA Hons, Flash *aaaahh aaaahhhh!!*

Time Taken

Around 2 weeks

Description

A grandfather can't quite get the idea of his grandson not liking meat. Even the meat is confused

Comments

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Jessica "Jess" Jerome

One of my favorites so far! Really awesome. Love your use of smears!!

Lea

You've got a great style and it was cool seeing the progression of this in the forum. One thing that bothers me is how noticeable the smears are. In my opinion, a good smear is almost invisible, only able to be felt and not seen.

Adrian Winchell

That's a ton of work, amazing you did a finished colored 2D animation for this, with backgrounds and extra characters and everything! Probably could have spent a bit more time on the acting though, so that we could see the characters move consistently and fluidly, not so grotesque. And, not freeze to a static image when it's not their turn to speak. Still, this looks like a style you're well used to, so if you're happy with it, keep it up. You certainly have an excellent handle on using smears in 2D!

Alexander Shuaibu

one of the best 2D animations ive seen... would love to see your cartoons on TV someday :D

Robert Zhou

Love the ideas and the reactions! Around

Moby

Amusing as usual. Busy as usual too. Good effort.