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Vegetarian Dinner
by Amin Bahari
Second entry to the 11 second club.
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Jessica "Jess" Jerome
lip syncing needs work
Valentious Williams
I actually like the context of this piece .
Adrian Winchell
Excellent 2D work. Your canines (fox? wolf? whatev) need TEETH tho'! It's weird to see them go m/b/p on n/t sounds! Also, not sure why the little one turns away at 227 - doesn't seem to make much sense as a reaction.
Sean Bitara Dela Torre
Haha! It cracked me up when the wolf said "chicken" and saw the chicken's reaction. Nice animation.
Lucas Donaldson
This is terrific!
One minor note: when the orange one says, "what is wrong with you?" I'm uncertain if his movements match his actions. The animal acts like he's asking a rhetorical question, but the dialogue sounds a little more like he's genuinely curious what is wrong with the vegetarian. To me at least, I like it a lot. maybe some more tweening between the keyframes?
nice job!
Sam Caudill
The fox on the left has a lot of character but the other characters look completely static by comparison.
Kendra Kaye Coffey
Lip syncing needs quite a bit of polishing. The mouth movements are not matching. The very first sentence of "I am a vegetarian" seems not defined. Like without sound I would think he is muttering.