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I said No Meat

by Lucas Donaldson

Final Rating: 3.78. Finished #139 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

Lucas Donaldson

Experience

I'm a hobbyist. But still relatively new.

Time Taken

1 month

Description

A 2d animation done with very basic, cartoony characters.

Comments

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Alice Reeve

Nice expressions. I'd like to see more of a context and story.

Brianna

This could've been helped a lot with a little more set building and attention to background

Adrian Winchell

Nice to see someone attempting 2D. Main critique I have is - move your characters off center, and/or use a different line for the background element - it looks like they're just teleporting into the same space since the line stays put and they are in the same location.

Sabrina Winkel

It's like the characters switch places in the same spot.. The only thing I like was his face at the last frame